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For my final blog post I decided to revise my second mini
project. For my second mini project, I did a photo essay of what HOMAGO looks
like. I showed picture examples of what Hanging out, Messing around, and
Geeking out looks like with peer-based learning as the central topic. What I did
to revise my photo essay was delete all the internet pictures and add my
personal pictures. I felt like there was a conflict between the personal photos
and the internet photos because there was a difference in the way they were
taken. I also revised the sentences that are used in the photo essay; I carefully
handcrafted all of the sentences so that they make sense and supported my views
on peer-based learning. I changed the beginning and end of my presentation as well;
I added photos to the title page and added a work cited page at the end of the
presentation. My final revision was a success because I feel that this photo
essay now does a great job in advocating peer-based learning.
I really enjoyed this post. Your photo essay was really good and well crafted. It portrayed the HOMAGO Essentials perfectly. I like how you put your own pictures in the photo essay because it shows that you went to see what they look like.
ReplyDeleteSooooo I totally loved this project. I used HOMAGO a lot throughout my mini projects and as a base to my learning and growing. I loved the explanations and examples of the different parts of HOMAGO.
ReplyDeleteReally well thought out final project the HOMAGO ideas were very well represented.
ReplyDeleteI really like this project I think it was a good idea to add personal photos.
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